Student Writing 2

The Human Wax Museum
May 6, 2002

The presenter was Kyshada M and I thought that she did a fantastic job. What I liked about her performance was how she dressed, her voice, word pronunciation, and the way she acted out the poem. I also liked the way she handled herself as a young adult.

The woman she represented was Maya Angelou. She is the first famous female African American poet writer. She is also famous for her poetry knowledge, imaginative works, and creativity. Maya Angelou is one of the top ten role models whom I dearly respect. One of the things that I favor about Dr. Angelou is she's a great speaker.

What impressed me most about the presentation was Kyshada's ability to concentrate, and keep a straight face while in front of the camera. Kyshada's voice was loud enough to be heard throughout the entire classroom. Another thing that I noticed is that she dressed like Dr. Angelou and I thought that was very intriguing.

There are only a couple of things that I thought needed to be improved. I thought that the people that introduced the famous Maya Angelou should have been more enthusiastic. Like when introducing the President of the United States of America. Also, Kyshada could have moved about more while reciting the poem.

Lastly, when Kyshada grows up, she's going to be an outstanding speaker. If she keeps up the good work, I think she will become famous herself. A lot of people in class are intimidated by her intelligence. However, when they looked at how she presented herself they felt ridiculous.